Reply To: Beta Blurb for “Watcher’s Cycle” (or whatever it’s going to be called)

[Brian Liew [YA-SF-GrimDark]]

Thanks again Adam,

I have copied and pasted your version into scrivener and incorporated your feedback into my current working version of the draft. I, too, realised that Desht’s story was not told in the long-short-short pattern and, as soon as I work out those two punches, I’ll post version … 3?

Regards,

Brian