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    Jan Carr

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    September 19, 2020 at 9:30 am

    Can you make this even punchier?

    Something like (but sure you can do better than this)

    Can hair ribbons and baby carrots stop a war and find Barbara’s Mum?

    The book examples are statements rather than questions but they’d fit on the front cover. Yours might be a bit long?

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