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    Sadye Paez

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    September 18, 2020 at 1:38 pm

    Building on Jan’s thoughts here for the first line. It is clear that ribbons hold some meaning but it is vague whether this is a longing or resentment or some other emotion. Perhaps that is intentional (note, I have not yet read the first page, just the first line as I share these thoughts)?

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