- MemberSeptember 18, 2020 at 4:05 am
It’s a really intriguing story and I would also guess it’s urban fantasy.
I feel the same as Maryanne with those questions. Otherwise I found it a little confusing jumping back and forth between the two main women so quickly, especially with them both having new powers – I had to double back to check I’d read it right.
The only other thing is the name, Feeding Jasmine Valentine. When I first read it I imagined it would be about someone neglected, in extreme poverty or with a medical problem. I love the name Jasmine Valentine, just not sure about the feeding. I’ve been told by three people that my main character sounds like he’s a building (Walter Hall).
Otherwise love it.
All the best to you,
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