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    Maryanne Barsotti

    September 17, 2020 at 9:16 pm

    Rose, IWRT!

    Is this urban fantasy? It’s not a genre I’ve read before, but your blurb certainly has me interested. The idea of a lifelong friendship in trouble is compelling.

    However, I have a few questions.

    In the first paragraph, is Daisy’s “new, powerful side” magic?

    Why is Julienne’s boyfriend named the Goblin? Is he really one?

    Are both women discovering their Magic side?

    Again, I think it sounds very interesting