Reply To: Beta Blurb – End of the DEW Line

[Rose Thompson]

Hi Nicole

I really like the arctic setting and the cold war era. This definitely caught my attention.

I was a bit caught out by the introduction of Tom right in the last paragraph. Has he been there the whole time, or does he arrive after the missile threat? If he’s there the whole time I would be inclined to introduce him earlier.

I would definitely like to read more!

Rose