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    Rose Thompson

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    September 17, 2020 at 9:40 am

    Hi Pippa

    Your blurb sounds really interesting. IWRT!

    I am really intrigued by the fire – how does she come to see the different coloured flames? Is she doing magic herself or is it a kind of ‘wrong time wrong place’ situation?

    It sounds like you have a lot of world building to do. Good luck!

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