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    Pippa Hillebrand

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    September 16, 2020 at 2:20 pm

    Oooh, thanks for the detailed thoughts Adam. I think you caught exactly the things I was struggling with when writing this. I would probably say that I consider character to be something I find challenging when writing (how true that is remains to be seen) which is why I struggled to bring that across in the blurb.

    There are a couple of things I need to add some colour to, and make them pop. Although I will leave the Great Mages vague because you have already guessed at about as much as I want to include in this book. They are part of the lost and forgotten history (and ~if~ when all this works out I’ll write them a book of their own).

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