- MemberSeptember 16, 2020 at 4:44 am
Hi Liz, I’m a bit late to the party here and most the stuff is covered. It is a really good blurb and the premise is great. Plus the way you’ve done the blurb has given me some food for thought. The only thing I’d add is the main character is the only person I really get an idea of. The President only through his comment “those whiny women” and that he’s done something to her in the past. Maybe a bit more that make him a challenge too? Certainly it would be good to get an idea of the husband as this should increase the conflict or tension. Is he ultra-loyal, stubborn, unpredictable or very astute, attentive? For example. Maybe even something to suggest what is at stake with her marriage – how important are they too each other?. Love it though.
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