Reply To: Beta Blurb for “Watcher’s Cycle” (or whatever it’s going to be called)

[Pippa Hillebrand]

FWIW, IWRT 😉

I feel like the thing that ties all of these stories together is the fact that they seem to be happening in parallel (and I echo what Adam said about this being reminiscent of the Stormlight Archives), and are influenced by [ZR]. I think that perhaps you could take out “It is now that [ZR] will reclaim its rightful power.” And instead, either mention how [ZR] influences each character, or make the thread that ties it together be more about the turmoil each character seems to be facing.

For example, if Desht is an acolyte of [ZR] (which is how I’m reading it) then that could be their hook to the main storyline, and it wouldn’t be a spoiler.