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    Rose Thompson

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    September 12, 2020 at 10:03 am

    Hi Sandra

    This looks great, IWRT.

    I got a bit lost when I got to Lord Ambrose, he seems to suddenly appear and Chamakin disappears half way through the blurb – this is a bit disorientating. I would be inclined to introduce Lord Ambrose earlier, and suggest where he comes into conflict with other characters.

    Rose

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