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    Rose Thompson

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    September 12, 2020 at 9:51 am

    Hi Mark

    IWRT!

    I like the idea of the two worlds kind of layered over each other – I have something similar in mine. The questions at the end are intriguing – I particularly like the ‘is he more than human’ type questions, and how this allows you to question his loyalties.

    I might be inclined to build on this a bit more, because it raises the stakes if he is going through a self discovery journey at the same time as being pulled into an external conflict.

    Rose

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