Hi Mark
IWRT!
I like the idea of the two worlds kind of layered over each other – I have something similar in mine. The questions at the end are intriguing – I particularly like the ‘is he more than human’ type questions, and how this allows you to question his loyalties.
I might be inclined to build on this a bit more, because it raises the stakes if he is going through a self discovery journey at the same time as being pulled into an external conflict.
Rose
