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    Jan Carr

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    September 9, 2020 at 11:37 pm

    I don’t like Game of Thrones ( I’ve seen a few episodes) but I think the blurb is clever because there is kind of a main character – The Stark family. So GOT blurb sets the scene – as yours does, on re reading, really clearly and then introduces the ‘character’. Your characters sound great, maybe as you progress with the story one will emerge as a bit more central than others?

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