- MemberSeptember 8, 2020 at 8:46 pm
Hi Laura! I really like the beginning in italics, it really draws me in. I think this blurb could be tightened up to further amp the mystery, especially after ‘And now one of them is dead.’ Maybe something like ‘And now one of them is dead because of what happened that night all those years ago. One thing is clear – Eve can see that her old friends have changed and no one is who she thought they were, including her own husband. And now she’s in terrible danger, guarding their secret before the killer can come for her next.’ But overall, IWRT!
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