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    Robyn Sarty

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    September 8, 2020 at 8:00 pm

    IWRT!

    I seriously can’t wait for you to write this book! (Have you read Steve Higg’s new series of cozy mysteries featuring a dog?)

    A couple notes on the blurb. The paragraphs are a little cluttered, and I would try tightening them up a bit. Cut lines like this one: “as she’s living in a tiny studio apartment and trying to get her finances and career back on track.” We don’t really need to know why she doesn’t have room for the dog in her life.

    “And suddenly, Jules can’t sleep at night…murderer.” I’d cut this down a bit. “Fears that a neighbour is living next door keep Jules up at night and she’s determined to…”

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