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    Denise Ganley

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    September 8, 2020 at 8:36 am

    Hi Kell,

    IWRT. I think this is stronger without the last two sections, actually. Here’s what I am thinking.

    The only ones that can teach her how to hunt monsters are the monsters themselves.

    A forty-something unremarkable office worker, Rako once thought that the words ‘Until Death Do Us Part’ meant something. But after a bitter divorce, she’s learned her lesson. Nothing lasts forever.

    Until one day she accidentally inherits the magic of a dying monster hunter during a chance encounter. And that power is going to stay with her until her death.

    But death might be sooner rather than later. The uncontrolled power eats away at her. And everyone is trying to kill her.

    The jealous apprentice that should have inherited the power. A conspiracy of corrupt authorities. And the dark horror that killed her predecessor now wants to tear her apart.

    Rako’s only option is to learn to use the magic or die.

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