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    Laura Regan

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    September 7, 2020 at 1:51 pm

    IWRT!

    Really excellent blurb Kell, I would definitely pick up your book based on that. I really like how you give a little bit of info about your protagonist before diving in to the plot. I also really like your tagline ‘<b style=”font-family: inherit; font-size: inherit;”>The only ones that can teach her how to hunt monsters are the monsters themselves.’

    My only suggestion would be for the 4th paragraph, maybe you could add more spacing;

    That might be sooner rather than later, because everyone is trying to kill her.

    The jealous apprentice that should have inherited the power.

    A conspiracy of corrupt authorities.

    The dark horror that killed her predecessor and now wants to tear her apart.

    But it’s excellent as it is, I wish mine was this good, I’m struggling along 😀

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