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    Josh Atkinson

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    September 3, 2020 at 2:48 am

    Here’s the pitch, blurb, and synopsis for my novel.

    Pitch:

    John Wick meets Chronicles of Narnia

    Synopsis:

    In order to seek vengance for her former colleague Rhys Hoffman is killed by her former boss Andrew Church and his right hand man Hector Russel. Fisher must return to the magical world of the Vanguard. Fisher’s companions fail must steal the three fragments of the Hell Hammer in order to gain access to Church’s compound all hell breaks loose. Fisher must fight her way through half of the Vanguard’s mercenaries before Church kills her and her friends.

    Blurb:

    Rhys Hoffman is dead. Vengence drags Nia Fisher back into the magical realm of the Vanguard which she helped turn into an underground world of mercenaries and the black market. The blood trail leads to her former boss Andrew Church (Dru) and his right hand man Hector Russel (Rush). As she hunts Russel through the Vanguard, To gain acceess to Church’s compound Fisher must rely on the aid of an old “friend” the unreliable sellsword Jackdaw and his two derilict companions Warwick (a hedgehog) and Ranger (a half witt mutt) to find the three fragments of the Hell Hammer. Her list of enemies grows, while Church does all he can to make sure it’s her blood that runs through the Vanguard.

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